My initial reaction to finchy’s work was not positive. I thought that she is a prose writer and maybe poetry is not her thing. But I have read her almost every poem on this board. I think this is one of her better work.
Monday, August 28, 2006
as my eyes strain in to
lay ing in the bath
i watch / sun set
eternal lee / orange
all ways orange
it lists further & further south
each day /
goes
a way for winter
& the sky be comes a residual
of grey tinged pink /
mountains now / foggy blue
old blind dog mountains
i wonder if they can see me
oh mountain / can you feel
this heavy heart i / carry
a feel ing i can't shake
all green be comes / black
twi light you say / no / night time
i say / & the day slips slips / i can't
stop it /
/
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